... If I got poetic?
Ok, then, how bout another question- does that make this suicide? ; )
Well, here goes
Ironic
Why is it
That we find ourselves when we think of others
That we find life when we no longer fear death?
Why is it
That nothing we keep will be ours
That in giving, we receive the most?
Why is it
That we so fear tomorrow we forget today
That in fearing time, we lose much of it?
Why is it
That a King would die for his subjects
That the same nails that held Him there now break our chains?
There its out of my system, now don't shoot!! O_o
= )
Whaddya think?
Was it good?
Or should I avoid poetry if I value my life? xD
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Nary a comment, on my beauteous poetry? Whats this? Shame! Shame I say! >=\
ReplyDeleteA little feedback, please =)
;)
It's great, BK!
ReplyDeleteI'm not flattering, it's pure genious! BRAVO!